Review for Admirable
(#) snail_mail 2008-01-10 12:32:13 PM
The transition from daydream back to reality confused me a little and I had to read back to realize that it was a daydream. You may take that into consideration next time for easier understanding. But then again, it might just have also been me being slow.
“Don’t forget me.” She whispered and he held her face as he kissed her. “Never.”
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