Review for Hamsters in a Cage

Hamsters in a Cage

(#) MarkPoa 2008-01-16 01:20:45 AM

This is very good. Spotted just a few typos here and there, but nothing major. I don't think you need to elaborate on the descriptions for the Difference and other stuff Ithilwen pointed out. For me, it adds to the point of view of the hamsters that these things were very much vague, but Important.

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