I liked it but there was only 1 inconsistency. Pete is taller than Patrick. Pete's 5'7" and Patrick's 5'4".
Why do I know these things? idk. I just do. And I was almost the same height as Patrick when I met him and Pete was taller than me. lol. But it was still awesome!
Author's response
Ahh =] Right ^_^ I Wasn't Sure Of The Heightage Cause I Heard That Patrick Made A Short Joke About Pete So Made An Assumption x