Review for Harry Potter and the Narrative Causality

Harry Potter and the Narrative Causality

(#) MadMax666 2008-01-19

But Schlock didn't get to blow anything up before he left! He got to kill Voldie, but he didn't get to break any of his stuff! Not fair! Not fair!

This really needs to be rewritten, to let Schlock break something of maybe a few of his Death Eaters...before he blows something up!

Glad to see another fan of "Schlock Mercenary" out there.

Author's response

- Schlock is a busy being. He got ripped out of a 'break things' contract to deal with the poser with the snake face.

- Besides he wanted to get out of there before the blonde girl tried to make Schlock Angels on him...