I have no idea on how or even what to review, because I don't know where you want to go with this. I liked the scene between Andy and Bailey, though. I've read about enough tears and temper tantrums.
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^^ Yes, I favored that scene as well, and I took care in writing it when I did because I didn't want her to be like other females "YOU'RE A FUCKING FAG?! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!" And all that jazz, but I did want it to be obvious she's upset by it. Thank you still for your review ^^.