Review for you can keep my brother
you can keep my brother
(#) _cranium_ 2008-02-05 11:55:00 AM
i know i asked you to make the sequel short but that's cause i thought that it would be hard for yuo to come up with an original idea. i know, shame on me.
i thought it would be just a sequel abuot life after skyler's death. you know, depressing. i'm not saying that writing about depression is a bad thing but after ten chapter it would be too much, i think.
BUT
hate letters is something i did not expect. although the is depression and sorrow (gerard's), the main feelings are something like hate and anger and jealousy. and that can lead anywhere.
so just go ahead and write new chapter to your very original sequel until your fingers fall off.
(yeah that was jacob. he likes fingers)
i thought it would be just a sequel abuot life after skyler's death. you know, depressing. i'm not saying that writing about depression is a bad thing but after ten chapter it would be too much, i think.
BUT
hate letters is something i did not expect. although the is depression and sorrow (gerard's), the main feelings are something like hate and anger and jealousy. and that can lead anywhere.
so just go ahead and write new chapter to your very original sequel until your fingers fall off.
(yeah that was jacob. he likes fingers)
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