Go get some coffee, take a deep breath, i have lots of things to say... xD
First of all, i almost let out a scream when i clicked on the link to read your new chapter and my eyes fell upon the title of it, just as i heard those exact words coming out of my speakers!! I swear to god, i was listening to the sharpest lives and right when i read the title, that part of the song came on! Weird :p
Anyways, of course i have your story on alerts! How else would i know when there is another fabulous chapter out? Oh, and by the way, your story is the ONLY story i'm reading that isn't frerard. All the others i've read bore me, buts yours is awesome.
Ok, now, to the story haha. This chapter is awesome. Seriously. I knew that scene at the end was from Project Rev before reading your note at the end because you described it just like it happened. I read a oneshot about that kiss too, about why Gerard "owed it" to Frank, just an hour ago, and it was pretty good too. But what Gee said at the end made me laugh. Too cute!! The way Defne let out a squeal made me laugh too, i totally understand her ;)
I've seen them twice in concert and didn't see any Frerard moments... that was the only thing i was a bit sad about! Lol.
Anyways, i didn't find the chapter at all rough or hard to read like you said, it was a good concert chapter, i could really imagine it all.
And lastly, i must say that Defne is so very right, Frank + Gee are so very hot together ;)
What would my mother say if she saw me write this...? hahaha
Oh, and thanks so much for your comments about liking my writing, i really appreciate it ;)
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Author's response
I saw the mails in my inbox that said I had reviews and that your story was updated. I totally cheated on my story with yours!! Now that I'm finshed with reading&reviewing yours and I finallly have the computer back, I took your advice (not about the coffee, but about the deep breath xD).
About the lyrics andy you listening to that part of the song at right that moment, it's not that weird really. It just means that the potions I made last night worked. Haha xD I should do more of them!!!
Again, thank you so much for reading and liking this although it's not a Frerard. I'm just trying to think of what to write in order to keep people interested, you know? I'm trying hard to give the personalities of the characters some depth because I wouldn't read a story with original characters I can't really imagine in my mind.
That Projekt Revolution kiss is a world of its own, really. I've read some one-shots about it, too, and they were pretty good. I've never been to an MCR show before because they've never come here to Turkey but when they come, finally, I hope for the tour of the next album - in which case I'm gonna have to wait for a few more years - I can only hope to see some Frerardness. Just some tiny interaction would be enough, hehe xD
And that last line Gerard said was lurking around in my brain, nagging to be included in the chapter. I just had to end it with that :)
Anyway, I was really worried that this chapter wouldn't turn out well because my concentration was close to zero at some moments, but now you made me feel good about it, so thank you again.
I don't know what your mother would say but my parents wanna read what I write and I've strictly banned them from it! xD