Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) slickrcbd 2008-02-07

I'm glad you finally uploaded a real update after all the false alerts that went out. Not that it's your fault, and you probably didn't even know about them.

I loved what happened to Snape. Hopefully these rapiests and any others will get some actual consequences instead of being protected by Snape and Dumbledore. I'm surprised Dumbledore wasn't arrested as an accessory, but that's the muggle law, not Wizarding.

Author's response

- the false alerts evidently happened when I make corrections to fix grammatical errors. Now that I know that happens, I will refrain from fixing things until I make an update.

- Because of who he is, Amelia has to move slowly and carefully against Dumbles... He's going down, just not quickly.