Review for Surreal

Surreal

(#) --KIKI-- 2008-02-08

ohmy god, the last few parts of this chapter literally made me cry...i still am, and its only been a few minutes after..thank God it didnt actually happen on TV,during the episodes!!

this is a really great composition, the entire story. But i have one question..why does all the bad stuff seem to happen to Delilah in these stories? Ive only read a few, so ill see what else happens.

final comment- Great job!!! Cant wait for more!!