Review for Harry Potter and the Distaff Side

Harry Potter and the Distaff Side

(#) Terdwilicker 2008-02-12 10:27:57 PM

Good, but too short. This battle needs more details. I recommend editing them in. Same with details on his date with Luna. Add another page for each part and you'll have the right level of detail, I think.

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- I'll look into that...

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