Review for Harry Potter and the Distaff Side

Harry Potter and the Distaff Side

(#) dennisud 2008-02-13

Lets NOT make this Harry Potter too much of a 'mary-Sue' here. What I mean is if he's here to defeat the female Voldy-thong, I think that Harriet has to be more involved as its her fight here more than him. He's there obviously to help, but also to get back to kick his voldy-short's balls up his retum!

dennisud

Author's response

- I've never been clear on what a Mary-Sue is, nor the Harry-sue I've frequently been accused of writing for that matter.

- To be clear, Harriet isn't sitting in the background braiding Orestes' hair. She has been doing what she needs to do to prepare herself as best she can for what is coming. What she's been doing hasn't been on camera because she isn't the focus of the story

- Harry will be introducing her to his Voldie in a box next chapter and she will be training both with him and on her own as time permits.

- The fight with the Dark Lady is indeed hers. This doesn't mean that Harry is willing to be a target. If attacked, he will respond.

- Harry is not going home. He will not be fighting Voldemort.