Aww this was a cute story, I liked it. I tried reading your Demons Within Me but had issues with it (as in, the story won't show for me, AHH!) so I checked out this one and it was very cute, awesome job.
The fact that Atlanta was confused about everything was definitely realistic considering her character, so that was good--- I've seen too many times people have just thrown them together instantly and went on and on about it. This was an enjoyable one-shot to read. =D