Review for Sunset
Sunset
(#) Lollipops_n_Gumdrops 2008-02-20 07:46:30 PM
This was really really cute! ^-^ Good job. I love their interactions together, such a lovely pairing.
A little friendly constructive criticism for you: to make it easier to read, try spacing out your paragraphs so it's not one big string of words.
Again though, I really liked it!
A little friendly constructive criticism for you: to make it easier to read, try spacing out your paragraphs so it's not one big string of words.
Again though, I really liked it!
Author's response
Thank you! I'll do the spaces. :)
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