Review for Sunset


(#) Lollipops_n_Gumdrops 2008-02-20

This was really really cute! ^-^ Good job. I love their interactions together, such a lovely pairing.

A little friendly constructive criticism for you: to make it easier to read, try spacing out your paragraphs so it's not one big string of words.

Again though, I really liked it!

Author's response

Thank you! I'll do the spaces. :)