Review for Sunset

Sunset

(#) Lollipops_n_Gumdrops 2008-02-20 07:46:30 PM

This was really really cute! ^-^ Good job. I love their interactions together, such a lovely pairing.

A little friendly constructive criticism for you: to make it easier to read, try spacing out your paragraphs so it's not one big string of words.

Again though, I really liked it!

Author's response

Thank you! I'll do the spaces. :)

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