Review for Sunset
(#) Lollipops_n_Gumdrops 2008-02-20 07:46:30 PM
A little friendly constructive criticism for you: to make it easier to read, try spacing out your paragraphs so it's not one big string of words.
Again though, I really liked it!
200 years have passed since the Second Wizarding War, and Harry's life is nothing more than a chapte...
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Somebody once asked me why I wanted to be a doctor.
High school Ryden AU. Skinny Love rewrite.