Review for How to Lose at Life
How to Lose at Life
(#) Vanir 2008-02-22 02:43:18 AM
Ooh! Ooh! I know this title!
Ah well, it was worth a shot.
A man becoming a man when piece after piece falls away from his world, and there is nothing bu Void to fill their places. A man, continuing past the point of hopelessness because there's no one to replace him, there's no one else. Just Void that fills the empty spaces until Void with a name is all he is.
Nice one. Here's a challenge. You have proven your maudling ability. Make something Happy-Go-Lucky. Make me laugh. I dare you!
Vanir
Ah well, it was worth a shot.
A man becoming a man when piece after piece falls away from his world, and there is nothing bu Void to fill their places. A man, continuing past the point of hopelessness because there's no one to replace him, there's no one else. Just Void that fills the empty spaces until Void with a name is all he is.
Nice one. Here's a challenge. You have proven your maudling ability. Make something Happy-Go-Lucky. Make me laugh. I dare you!
Vanir
Author's response
You know, I think the only reason you review is so you can make your words all lacy and philosophical. Not that I don't love it, of course.
whines How can you do this to me? REQUEST a HUMOR piece? I have exactly three humors - out of forty-odd! What does this say to you? Because it says to me: "Novocain, you're a repressed, sarcastic dyke who is in danger of becoming emo."
...Fine, I'll do it. But it may be a while - my life doesn't exactly inspire humor at the moment. Ha! That's how I'll do it! wanders away, mumbling This requires actual effort. Ask for something hard, why don't you. grumbles
whines How can you do this to me? REQUEST a HUMOR piece? I have exactly three humors - out of forty-odd! What does this say to you? Because it says to me: "Novocain, you're a repressed, sarcastic dyke who is in danger of becoming emo."
...Fine, I'll do it. But it may be a while - my life doesn't exactly inspire humor at the moment. Ha! That's how I'll do it! wanders away, mumbling This requires actual effort. Ask for something hard, why don't you. grumbles
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