Review for The Savior of the Damned

The Savior of the Damned

(#) ficfriction 2008-02-26

I don't know if it's still cutting off or not, but it cuts off right after Gee runs out of the room and frank is thinking about his lips. Cuts off at "his lips were".

Other than that I loved the story so far! ^^ I just read it straight through hehe. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's response

Yes it was cut off, thanks for realizing that. I have the missing part up now in a different chapter because Ficwad won't let me post it all together for some reason. It's not much, but its the end and important.