Well, I'm really liking this story so far.... which is odd, since, despite loving pretty much all your other work, I avoided this for a while, thinking it was going to be a stupid forced marriage story like most of them are.... that aside, I don't think you should tell about the falling out... we can figure things out on our own, and leaving some mystery might help you later on in the story... so far my assumption has been Dumbles convincing Remus to do something he wouldn't have if he actually cared for Harry, and maybe suggesting something to molly and ginny that they would have done without the suggestion anyway....
keep writing, but don't forget your other stories... I love them too!
Author's response
- I'd already done the 'there's a contract and you've gotta marry her' story. For this, the marriage contracts is nothing more than an excuse for Harry to talk to girls he normally wouldn't.
- What Remus did is far worse than your assumption.
- The muse for this one just won't shut the hell up. I'll have to work on it for a while so that it will let me work on other stories.