Hi, Clell,
Your acknowledgment was very generous; seeing a suggestion 'in print' was quite gratifying by itself.
Anyway, a nice chapter in a good story--I don't have a lot to say; I agree with the reviewers above... (even the subtle Ron-bashing one. I still think that it's a little OOC for Ron and Hermione to let Ginny and Molly's bitching keep them away from Harry, but as I said before, I'm willing to accept that as part of you taking Harry in the direction you want.)
I felt a little foolish about my suggestions for a Hogsmeade date after I posted them; you had made it pretty clear that the 2nd date wasn't really heading there.... ah well, I'll enjoy reading about it when it comes.
cheers-
-Rijl
Author's response
- Hey, your critiques took a lackluster scene and made it one that people seem to love. Credit where credit is due.