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I swear, I almost threw up. Oro/Sasuke? You are so much more depraved than the first chapter had shown you are fucked up, lovely.
I don't like it. but I'll read it because you asked me to. If you don't like my reviews, tough, dearie.
This chapter was very jagged. It was like slitting your wrist with a serrated knife, you keep getting snagged and the pain just gets worse.
I like the metaphor you used there. It's quite adequate. This chapter is there to introduce the main conflict. Though I know things are not quite clear as of yet, bear with me. I am striving to work better.