Review for Of Polka Dot Shorts and Nightmares

Of Polka Dot Shorts and Nightmares

(#) bride_of_nickula 2005-09-24 01:41:37 AM

Firstly, the present tense and almost script format is a little off-putting. It's sometimes hard to visualise who's talking when it's almost all dialogue.
Oh, and "mom" isn't used in the UK. American characters would use it, but I doubt if Andrea would.

However, the storyline is intriguing enough for me to want to find out what happens next!

The cross-over is a difficult format to do well, so I hope you can pull it off.

Log in!




Register Lost password

Filter

You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0

 

Featured Story

Site Stats

  • Authors: 608878
  • Stories: 40301

Recent Stories