hi!
i would like to review your story! (hehe... yeah)
this story is really good! very original! and i really do like the choice of name for the girl in the comic store.... keep going! its really good!
hehe...
!Ruby!
Author's response
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like the name and I am very happy that you like the story, I shall try to update this evening, though it may not be this evening to you because you may be in another country to me lol :P Should be soon though!
Thanks xxx