Review for Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

(#) MonCappy 2008-03-22

wow. Ron is a fucking asshole who just discarded and rejected the best thing to ever happen to him. What an idiot. what he did to Hermione is fucked up and completely beyond the pale. He should be placed put under a the Cruciatus while having his mind raped and being forced to relive his worst enemies for the rest of his natural life. What a colossal fucking asshole! Hermione does not deserve the horrific treatment she has just been made a recipient of. Can you please make Ron a victim of the Cruciatus for a week or two? I think that should be the beginning of his punishment. Asshole! Ron is an asshole!

Dumbles is being an idiot again. His threatening to cast a virginity charm on Daphne is disgusting and a repugnantly repulsive violation of her privacy if he follows through on the threat. Hopefully the earful McGonnagall gave him will dissuade him of that notion. He is another prize winner who deserves to be place under the Cruciatus. He certainly has done more than enough to deserve it.

There will definitely be fall out from the confrontations that occurred in this chapter. I can't wait to see how the confrontation with Bitch (Ginny) will be resolved.

I have some advice on how Harry can get rid of the redheaded stalker bitch. I think a nice refreshing session under the Cruciatus curse should get her to rethink her actions. Nothing quites says 'I love you' like a Crucio.

Author's response

- You know, it's subtle, but I'm getting the feeling that you don't care for my version of Ron...

- Control is important to Dumbles...

- Yes, the fall out is coming.

- You're kind of free with that Crucio stuff... Potential Dark Lord material I'm guessing...