Review for Axl gets stuck in back in time
Axl gets stuck in back in time
(#) everlong 2008-03-25 03:05:30 PM
I'm just gonna mention the same stuff to you again, although...this story was slightly better than the last one I reviewed on your other account, so well done on that. So yeah; spelling, punctuation, grammar. I know you write these for fun...but if you can't even write the intro/summary correctly for the story...what hope is there? Read through repeatedly before you post. Or just get someone else to.
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