Review for A Twisted Timeline

A Twisted Timeline

(#) Katsuhito 2008-03-30 09:49:48 AM

lol, a literal cliffhanger. you cheeseball. :)

Anyway, as usual this chap was quite entertaining. Loved the bits with the contract on Riddle and Luna's and Ginny's intro to Harry. The fin and amusing ways that the DEs were offed was good too. Is Harry becomming a little crazy himself? The scene with LeStrange and the roasting of marshmallows seemed to indicate a burgeoning dissacociative (sp?) disorder. Killer Schwartz is somewhat amusing, but this one seemed too scripted (if you'll pardon the expression).

Eagerly awaiting the next installment,
-K

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