Review for I Told You So
My one criticism is that the last line reads a bit oddly. It almost sounds like Wakka is asking this question to himself or that the point of view has suddenly shifted to Lulu at the end. I suggest "Do you even say 'I told you so' to yourself?"
As always though, that's just my opinion.
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