Nice chapter. It really built up the suspense, especially when all the police were being informed of the robbery. Seeing as this story is an AU, the OOC is more acceptable, so don't worry so much about that. Interesting how each character seems to have different roles in the real world, it makes it seem realistic. (sort of) Well, anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. =D
Author's response
Thank you for your review! I really appreciate it! ^^ If you're still interested in reading more, I'm going to update in a bit! ^^