Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) stealacandy 2008-04-07 12:17:58 PM
Anyway: "Thy make sense maiden?" doesn't sound too good.
How about: "Thy words maketh sense"? or "Thou maketh sense"? Or better yet "Thy words ring true" or something like that.
- Seriously, when I do a reedit, "Thy words ring true" will be the new phrasing... And here I thought everyone would comment on crusty old Amelia being called a maiden...
A place for my plot bunnies, shorts and incomplete ideas will go.
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