Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

(#) stealacandy 2008-04-07 12:17:58 PM

I'd review the chapter, but it pales when compared to the author's note... Loved the author's note! Well... crap.


Anyway: "Thy make sense maiden?" doesn't sound too good.

How about: "Thy words maketh sense"? or "Thou maketh sense"? Or better yet "Thy words ring true" or something like that.


mo

Author's response

- Oh sure, where were you at three am when I was trying to write in Thor-eese.

- Seriously, when I do a reedit, "Thy words ring true" will be the new phrasing... And here I thought everyone would comment on crusty old Amelia being called a maiden...

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