Oh God! Adding Mad-Eye to this mix? The mind boggles as to what will happen next!
Laurel is lovely, and the whole "My Stallion" thing is a hoot. Luna and Susan make a great team, and suit Harry almost perfectly - just add Hermione!
A quaffle to the chops is the very least that Dumbledore deserves, and a Molly-slap too, of course.
Excellent chapter. Now I'm addicted, you evil shipyard, you!