Review for When you're gone...

When you're gone...

(#) lilrainforest 2008-04-08

heyheyhey.
this is cute... but really tragic.
did gerard get shot at the end or something?

and the composition was nice. (:
ive composed wayyyy worse.

It was good :D
~Rayy

P.S. HAPPY BIRTHDAY GERARD WAY! (tomorrow)

Author's response

Yeah.. He got shot.. :) It's like my first story and first composition ever! :) Thanks for the review and thanks for reading! :P I liked Break Me Or Take Me by the way. :)