Review for Harry Potter and the Chronicles of Time: Part II
Harry Potter and the Chronicles of Time: Part II
(#) melferd 2008-04-15 03:30:28 PM
Your story is intriguing and different. However;
you are affected by others, you both cause and effect others. Please, get some grammar help, beat your beta about the head and shoulders with a copy of the Little, Brown handbook.
It distracts from an otherwise delightful tale.
you are affected by others, you both cause and effect others. Please, get some grammar help, beat your beta about the head and shoulders with a copy of the Little, Brown handbook.
It distracts from an otherwise delightful tale.
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