Review for Ruwalk's Ten Step Guide To Seducing Your Recalcitrant Colleague

Ruwalk's Ten Step Guide To Seducing Your Recalcitrant Colleague

(#) Vuirneen 2005-10-05 04:07:23 PM

Heh. That was really cute and funny. It was good to see Ruwalk turn from supreme smugness to frustration.

I'm pretty sure as well that he didn't think he loved Alfeegi until he couldn't get him.

I'm not sure about the ending. It needs to be short, like the other parts, but something must have happened to clue Alfeegi in... unless it was a tease all along to get Ruwalk to fall in love, instead of lust.

Hmmm...

Also... yay! more ficwad fics. I didn't realise until recently that someone else had posted up here. I think that I already read Akisawana's fics so I started reviewing yours.

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