Review for One Man Army

One Man Army

(#) Cateagle 2008-04-21

You got a good mix of action and story advancement here and I like the lessons Harry's already learned from the battle to take Derem City. It will be interesting to see just why it was targeted and just who else is among the plotters. Meanwhile, I wonder if Harry's going to sense the Jedi team looking for him and how he'll react to their presence. That, and their response(s) to his moves should tell hime a lot.

I'm looking forward to your next chapter.