Review for Summer of Contracts

Summer of Contracts

(#) Maijril 2008-04-22

I normally don't review stories, but I'd just like to begin by saying that I've enjoyed this one so far.

Having said that however, I think that Harry dismisses the "vision" far too quickly. I will, of course, reserve further judgement until I read the next chapter.

On another note, it was far too obvious that Amelia was going to die, and extremely expected. This made that entire scene, to me at least, seem stale.

Please don't take this for a flame or anything like that. I'd just like to reiterate that I AM enjoying this story.