Review for As Of Yet, Untitled.

As Of Yet, Untitled.

(#) shysmile 2008-04-24

The lullaby was so pretty. Do you speak Italian?

The nurse's comment about the domestic abuse hotline was a much needed moment of hilarity in a strained and sad chapter.

In the next chapter I'm having this fantasy of Frank bursting into the hospital room with ballons and a card that says, "Congratulations, It's a boy!" or something of that nature.

I loved it as I always do.

Author's response

I agree. And no, tragically, I do not. I have a strong desire to learn though.

Yes, the nurse provided some comic relief. It was getting to be too much for me.

I'm thinking it's possible I may use that. That's freakin' hilarious.

Thank you. A good, helpful review, as always.