Review for Warmth

Warmth

(#) JennBarny 2008-04-27 06:56:20 PM

Nice and sweet...just a couple suggestions- 'I could HAVE died'. sister in collEge, and there was one in there that was supposed to be one word where you separated the 'a' from the rest of it. i don't remember the word though. Other than that, cute!

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