(#) Rubel 2008-04-29
Neat. Good characterization though the spelling and grammar could use a little work. I like the story idea and I can't wait to see where the big divergances start happening. Going by inference Ron is not very close to Harry in this story so will Harry be developing any other close friends? Well I'll definitely be keeping and eye out for this story. Keep up the good work.
Author's response
Harry will be closer to Neville and his Teammates then Ron. It is very possible that Ron was a plant by the headmaster in this fic. Whereas Hermione is a wild card. I still not sure what kind of DD this fic has.