Review for A Twisted Timeline

A Twisted Timeline

(#) Elfwyn 2008-04-30

Well I must admit to being disappointed to the arc of this story. It started out strong and very interesting but now NINE years into the story Harry once again has yet to finish off LV even with all the knowledge he brought back with him. It shouldn't have taken him that long when you started out with a strong smart Harry that now seems to have lost focus and lack-wit. I mean what idiot willingly walks into Voldies trap--like he would keep his word that her father was even in there? Very disappointing for a story that had such promise at the start.