Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) Cateagle 2008-05-07 07:21:45 PM

-Laughs softly- A most excellent ending. I esp. loved the three confrontations and the unique means by which each was resolved. That was a sly move on Harry's part to use Tom's arrogance against him and I loved the use of the modified bubble-head charm on Dumbles. But, for my taste, /"I’m playing this in the Albus Dumbledore mode, telling no one anything remotely useful, and lying whenever I feel like it." definitely has to take its place as a truely classic line.

Author's response

- Thanks. So far I've got 12 people who hate eliminating Tom via a fealty oath and you make two that do like it.

- and one guy is particularly pissed that I suggest that the Great and Powerful Albus Dumbledore could be taken down by a Bubblehead charm...

- As far as the line goes, yeah I like it too.

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