Review for Faith & Donuts
One note on punctuation g - names (and nicknames) need to be set off by commas when directly addressing someone in dialogue. For example: "Thanks Tongari" should be punctuated: "Thanks, Tongari." You've done it correctly in some parts of the story, but not consistently. Just a heads up. :)
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