Review for 3 AM

3 AM

(#) sunlizard 2008-05-13 02:44:04 PM

really nice. short and sweet, original too. only one little thing - in the descriptions of their conversations on the balcony, there're a lot of 'she's, and it a bit muddeling to follow which she is she, if that makes sense. but i really like it.

Author's response

hey thanks for reading and reviewing!sorry if you got confused, but i purposely did not use names because i wanted the ending to be a surprise. the rwo she's are actually only one person, if it wasn't clear at the end.

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