Review for Harry Potter and the Ultimate Warrior.

Harry Potter and the Ultimate Warrior.

(#) red_jacobson 2008-05-14

okay; better on the size of the chapters, please, get a beta reader, there are some nasty spelling errors in this chapter; a couple that stand out in memory are "Threw" when "Through" is the word that you probably meant. I'm referring to when Dumbledore tries to use Legimency on Harry and Harry warns him off. Also, when Harry tells Draco to enjoy Azkaban; because he's going to tell the "Aura's"? I'm pretty sure you meant Aurors.

Otherwise, decent chapter, and I'm liking the Harry/Hermione interaction and looking forward to more.

Red