Review for Technomancer - The light path

Technomancer - The light path

(#) red_jacobson 2008-05-14 11:27:53 AM

funny; especially 'yous can kiss my elven arse!'

Young Harry talks a little too mature for a 5 year old, though.

looking forward to what you have next

red

Author's response

Hmm mature? glad to see my plan is working! =). To be honest I kinda need him to be a bit more mature and intelligent than the average Bear, a normal 5 year old would do childish and selfish things. I like to think a lifetime of no friends would make a person more serious, and learning to read hefty reading literiture like The Lion Witch and the Wardrobe at 5 would show smarts. ;) Wait for more and things shall be revealed.

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