Review for To Fight the Coming Darkness

To Fight the Coming Darkness

(#) AnnF 2006-08-06 01:10:47 AM

Chapter title becomes a bit squicky with Lucius' punishment revealed. Ick.

:)

Author's response

I actually had a version where the joke is less implied and Peter actually taunted Lucius by saying he was going to make sure to eat lots of corn this week so Lucius wouldn't miss out on his nutrition. I was told it was a little over the top, so I went for the subtlety. Jim

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