Review for Harry Potter: Dark Creature
Harry Potter: Dark Creature
(#) Shyboy 2008-05-19 03:08:32 PM
Well, it's definetely not bad but there are a few elements that could have been done better.
For example, Voldemort suddenly realises Lily is a vampire but is unclear just how.
And Dumbledore is really not that old. I doubt Wizards live longer than usual people unless they do so with the aid of spells or such.
For example, Voldemort suddenly realises Lily is a vampire but is unclear just how.
And Dumbledore is really not that old. I doubt Wizards live longer than usual people unless they do so with the aid of spells or such.
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