Review for Sacrifice
Sacrifice
(#) MarkPoa 2008-05-21 09:06:56 AM
I liked the flow of the narrative within the poem, though I thought having her rival be her sister seemed almost contrived (unless this is a true story). This reads too real to almost hurt. :)
Author's response
I don't quite understand your last sentance.....
This isn't based off a true story, though. I had to write a narrative poem for my Creative Writing class (which was amazing, by the way) and the image of two people dancing on the beach came to my mind. I thought about making them best friends, but it would have been harder to show it and have it still be a poem.
This isn't based off a true story, though. I had to write a narrative poem for my Creative Writing class (which was amazing, by the way) and the image of two people dancing on the beach came to my mind. I thought about making them best friends, but it would have been harder to show it and have it still be a poem.
Filter
You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0
Featured Story
-
Getting a Clue
by radiofishlip (PG-13)after a hard day Harry blurts out a question then realises he had no idea
In: Harry Potter
Site Stats
- Authors: 197935
- Stories: 39100
Recent Stories
-
Save Yourself, I'll Hold Them Back
by ColorfulShadow (PG-13)A killjoy is a killjoy for a reason. Not just because of your past but for what you do. And my reaso...
-
When Both Our Worlds Collide
by ColorfulShadow (PG-13)Never cross the border in the woods. It's best to stay as far away from the woods as possible, or yo...
-
Auditions.
by xXchickenwithatacoXx (PG-13)Yeah, see that up there? What does it say? AUDITION, BITCHES. . . . *big brown eyes* Pwease?
-
I am not frigging dead!
by emocutter91 (PG-13)for my profane language not a story, but important since apparently I've been "dead" for a while.
-
I am not frigging dead!
by emocutter91 (PG-13)for my profane language not a story, but important since apparently I've been "dead" for a while.