Review for Harry Potter....and the Amusement Park?
Harry Potter....and the Amusement Park?
(#) alchemist1806 2008-05-22 03:44:10 PM
Try not to leave author's notes in the middle of the story, give them out at the end...makes the work look better. Also rereading your work before posting it allows you to remove silly mistakes in spelling and grammar.
As for the rest, mushy stuff. Its not my cup of tea but whatever suits you fine...
As for the rest, mushy stuff. Its not my cup of tea but whatever suits you fine...
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