Review for Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

(#) Cateagle 2008-05-24

Nice done and polished and I like the final version.

I rather suspect that Daphne's note was forced by her father; I do hope she's able to straighten matters out when she returns to Hogwarts. If she doesn't return, I'm willing to bet Harry talks things over with Tracey and may mount a rescue raid (Daphne's father may end up really regretting his actions).

I thought Mr. Granger and Harry discussing Justin was a nice bit of support and I loved the way Harry described his feelings about her.

Author's response

- Thank you

- I can't reveal much without exposing my plot... But consider the power of a head of house...

- Hey, what are 'big brothers' for?