I have one thing to say. I think that Daphne's letter to Harry breaking up with him was forced considering what she said before they separated in Hogsmeade station. If her father (keep in mind that there is a possibility, however remote, that he is not behind this) then he deserves to die (or at the very least get an extremely thorough ass-kicking and pounding). He should have left things alone.
One thing this update has done is make my urgently look forward to the next update. I don't like seeing how things ended here and I want to find out what happens next.
Author's response
- yes he should have, but recall there are ways to hurt someone without becoming violent...