I agree with the other reviews; the chapter while extremely short grabbed by attention but there was little to judge the storyline by. If the following chapter are just as short it would be extremely irritating rather than eye catching as one cannot immerse oneself into such a short chapter. Rather just as the story is getting good it stops. While cliffhangers have there places it is not in every chapter especially while trying to establish a storyline. Will look for more of this before I give up though.