Review for Griffon Reborn
Griffon Reborn
(#) Vanir 2008-05-29 08:38:37 PM
Interesting, but it feels a bit like you're stalling. Don't get me wrong, the Hedwig bit was brilliant, and the fight wwas a lot closer to what i believe a wandfight would be like, rather than the usual OK Corral shit. However, i think you need to pick up the pace a bit. You didn't move the plot a lot in this one, and i think it's time for more of an introduction of Ezekial. Further, is there any spirit left in Harry? He doesn't show aa lot of it, but maybe I'm just missing the point. Anyway, thanks, and I'll be here for your next installment.
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