Review for Alone In The Dark

Alone In The Dark

(#) catlover070904 2008-06-01

The story, the plot, all great. I love the idea very much but the English is just so bad!. I am sorry, really but it looks like English is not your first language at all. I am not giving up on the story, but it is just so hard to read at certain points and also hard to understand. Do you have a beta? someone who does know English who could read over your chapter and tell you where you got it wrong and help you out?